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Wednesday, May 29, 2013

Hump Day Hook!



And here we are yet again! I just sent in the first round of edits for the upcoming Defying the Skies. As I went over the document one more time to make sure I didn't miss anything, I was struck by how much this exchange resembled last week's HDH! However, it's pretty obvious that there have been some *cough* changes between that moment in Searching the Skies and now. Happy reading, and don't forget to read more scintillating hooks from the other awesome authors!

The imprint of his lips and Marcus’s hands on her body made his requests impossible to ignore. She slithered into his lap and they tumbled onto the covers. “So much for straightening up the room for you,” she mumbled as his mouth returned to her neck and chest.

“I noticed.”
 

“Lies.”
 

“Okay, I didn’t. But I appreciate the effort.”
 

Geneva wriggled out of his grasp. “Let’s at least fold back the bedspread before we create a wrinkled mess.”
 

“Whatever you say.”
 

She turned back the covers, revealing the pristine sheets underneath. As soon as she was done, Ash grabbed her around the waist and pulled her down next to him. “I thought you said we weren’t going to do much without Marcus!” she said.
 

“We’re not. I’m just making sure you’re warmed up.”
 

“Uh-huh.” With his soft lips and deft fingers, he erased her reasons for resisting. “This isn’t fair,” she half-heartedly argued.
 

His kisses traveled between her breasts and traversed her abdomen. “Do you want me to stop?” he asked.

5 comments:

  1. No! Don't stop! LOL Great hook! :)

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  2. Hell no, I don't even want you to stop and I'm just the reader! lol

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  3. I don't think she's really that bothered about what's fair and what isn't. :-P

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