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Wednesday, May 8, 2013

Hump Day Hook!

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It's Wednesday, and we all know what that means! This week's hook comes from the third of the Disintegration prequels (which *cough cough* are FREE at Smashwords). After your attention span has recovered from this hook, don't forget to check out the other participating authors!

Ro stared at the ceiling, gasping for air. The wooden floorboards were rough and rigid beneath her, but the discomfort barely registered. “I have a feeling my back’s going to be killing me tomorrow,” Devan said from beside her. 

“My knees will probably hate me, too.” She blew an errant lock of hair out of her face. “Doesn’t matter. It was worth it.” 

“Agreed.” He turned towards her and ran a finger along the curve of her exposed breast. “When you’re on top of me like that, with that look on your face....” 


Devan sat up. “Let’s do it,” he said. “Let’s finally get out of here.”


  1. Ooh, get out of where? Nice hook.

  2. Oh, how wonderful that their lovemaking precipitated a major life change. Great job on the realistic and enjoyable description.

  3. Yes, get out of where? Though, I believe it was worth it. Want to know what happens before and after. Great hook!

  4. Ooh, lots of questions. Great hook.